Monday, September 15, 2008

Brazilian

There once was a man who lived in Brazil.
Who dreamt he was going to be killed.
But once he awoke,
In his room stood a bloke.
And then the trigger was pulled.

5 comments:

brittaemily said...

I like how it rhymes and I LOVE the ending. poor guy

E-rock said...

Cute!

d_rek said...

kinda ironic for the brazilian, very good i see alot of potential in writing like this.

crystal said...

oh wow that is such a neat idea putting it into a lymeric! (i think thats how you spell it lol)
and i love that ending! its cool cuz it goes along with that one poem about the guy that ate his pillow.... lol

Anonymous said...

Dang i feel bad for that guy