There once was a man who lived in Brazil. Who dreamt he was going to be killed. But once he awoke, In his room stood a bloke. And then the trigger was pulled.
oh wow that is such a neat idea putting it into a lymeric! (i think thats how you spell it lol) and i love that ending! its cool cuz it goes along with that one poem about the guy that ate his pillow.... lol
Hello my name is Charles Wells, and i am currently a senior at CPHS. I work at a movie theater and as a "benefit" i get to see all the free movies i want :D so i recently decided to begin writing reviews so please feel free to comment i would love some feedback!
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I like how it rhymes and I LOVE the ending. poor guy
Cute!
kinda ironic for the brazilian, very good i see alot of potential in writing like this.
oh wow that is such a neat idea putting it into a lymeric! (i think thats how you spell it lol)
and i love that ending! its cool cuz it goes along with that one poem about the guy that ate his pillow.... lol
Dang i feel bad for that guy
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